I need some harsh criticism

Dsiembab Dsiembab is offline Offline Mar 17th, 2007, 5:33 am |
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I created this website it is a beta version and was wondering if anyone could review it and tell me what you think . Any critism is welcome. thanks Dave
http://imcheap.bravehost.com/
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ShaneMcP ShaneMcP is offline Offline | Mar 17th, 2007
Its not cheap its froogle .

I would say that the banner at the top needs improvement. It should be more sharp. Same with the menu. Something that may help would be to relocate your links at the top of the page under the banner. The banner itself does need some work. You could pay a local designer to design something for you... or someone on here actually! Hope that helps!
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Phaelax Phaelax is offline Offline | Mar 19th, 2007
Way too many advertisements flashing in my face, they make the page look too cluttered. As for google ads, I still don't understand why people willingly put those on their sites. Just because its Google doesn't make the ads any better.

I think the header and footer should extend to the width of the content as well.
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iamthwee iamthwee is offline Offline | Mar 19th, 2007
Plus the text overlaps in firefox.
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sandbox sandbox is offline Offline | Mar 19th, 2007
no offense.. bu the ads trhow off the flow of this web page. oh ya... you also have a major case of divitis.. try tp cut down on the number of divs you use.
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Dsiembab Dsiembab is offline Offline | Mar 19th, 2007
thanks for the info. I have to agree with you on the ads. Been using web dwarf, an older paste and cut publisher. learning how to use nvu. just started learning html threw w3schools, since I don't practice on a daily basis it will take awhile, thanks for the reply Dave
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Dsiembab Dsiembab is offline Offline | Mar 19th, 2007
iamthwee, going to download firefox, should've done it before thanx for the tip. been using paint.net for making the banners and the buttons, just downloaded it someday the pictures might look like yours, thanks for the reply Dave
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Dsiembab Dsiembab is offline Offline | Mar 19th, 2007
sandbox, no offense taken, it's the only way I'll learn thanks Dave
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Dsiembab Dsiembab is offline Offline | Mar 20th, 2007
just got done, check it out when you have a chance and thanks for your time, Dave
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Gmarvz Gmarvz is offline Offline | Mar 25th, 2007
choosing bravenet as your host for me is the main problem here... they just force too many ads and pop ups.. placing too much ads can drive your visitors(like me) away.. so you must put it in consideration..

and i found out on your codes that you have two <html>,<head> and <body> tags.. why?

and from what i observe.. you also block the top banner ads that bravenet provide.. you might be banned if they will finnd out about it..
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