Review my website!

StormBrace StormBrace is offline Offline Jun 27th, 2009, 11:08 pm |
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Hey guys I would love for you to review my website its www.stormbrace.com

Feedback would be great! Thx
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vanhove vanhove is offline Offline | Jun 28th, 2009
It looks like you used a free website builder to build this page. Often times these free tools do not offer you the abilities that paid tools do. It is evident on your website that it was not done professionally. That is not good. Looks can not really help a website but they can defiinitley hurt one. Just my opinion and something to think about.
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almostbob almostbob is offline Offline | Jun 28th, 2009
site fails validation.
Too much of the important stuff is below the fold line(bottom of the 'average' screen casual browsers dont pan around, put the important stuff top left.
Microsoft Word is NOT a website editor, the code it produces is crap
1895 lines of html code to porduce that 80 line page
its slow to load
very slow
rewrite the code in a html editor
get the styles out of every page and into external stylesheets where they belong
Get the crap column off the left side, it serves no purpose
redesign
tree layout
links that work
pages that approximate browser screens casual users DO NOT SCROLL
Heading
image & explanation - link
Heading
image & explanation - link
Heading
image & explanation - link
Heading
image & explanation - link
Heading
image & explanation - link
alt text for images
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jaakko jaakko is offline Offline | Jun 30th, 2009
you need change title and add description. good luck.
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googleportfolio googleportfolio is offline Offline | Jul 5th, 2009
Hai,
I just saw your site.

Your site objective is quite clear with clear narrations usings pictures.

The navigation and loading time is also quite good.

It would be better if u can utilise many open spaces in the site using some kindof banners or so.

Love to help,if requested.

Thanks
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Hey guys I would love for you to review my website its www.stormbrace.com

Feedback would be great! Thx
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xfranco xfranco is offline Offline | Jul 5th, 2009
Also squizzed:
-> font sizes can be either stadardized
-> images sizes stadardized, alligned
-> Titles (all pages)
-> allignment of the bullets on the left hand side
-> with resolutions available today you can use more page width
-> Content: Maybe move the "who" and the "how" to page 2 and bring more of the "what" and the "why" for the front
Enjoy and good luck!

ctch me on twitter/xfranco
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