ok i just started building this site today about an hour ago(it is 3 am) and I need some criticsm.
www.geocities.com/willpull22

now keep in mind that this is a free geocities page made in about 30 min in dreamweaver.

I like the layout...the colors are good also. The large space on the right (not the taskbar) needs some navigational pointers i.e. headlines to direct attention to subjects...underline, bold, and change the color to set it really apart (the blue I think could be a bit different from the blue of your links). Just my two cents..

just update my site only two pages need t be finished.

I would suggest correcting some grammatical issues - It makes the article pretty difficult to follow at times. ... or should I say makes it follow hard the sometimes issue. j/k

OK i have switched my page to willpull22.remnetworks.com
it has the page setup with some smaller fixes like some gramar issues and an added forum