Hello All,

I have just redesign my site, its a craft site.
Please review for design, layout and give me some honest feedback. Suggestions are also welcome.

Yurts and Tipi Information

Thanks

Great site. I really really liked it you did a good job on it. I read the whole thing with much interest. The only thing that I would like to see there would be a link to some sites that actually sell yours. That would be nice and you could make some money on it too. But the is very pleasant and easy on the eyes, and very informative, What else would you want? ( except a product to buy)
Luba

I like the basic look.
The top menu layout is awkward with the menu choices taking two lines.
There are many, many, many, many spelling and grammatical errors:
"There are several Yurt builders in, most of they create high quality Yurts, mostly made to order."
"The Yurt builders seem to be enviroment friendly "
"we hve a list "
etc.

I have just taken a look at your site.

The images are great, loads smoothly and has lost of interesting information.

However, I would suggest the following:

The front page needs to be geared to what you are trying to achieve - currently it is not clear.
The English needs to be proof read - you have a lot of grammatical mistakes.
Hire a Tipi and buy a Tipi seem to be in Latin.
Not really sure what you are trying to achieve - I think you are looking to hire and sell your product but this is not clear.


I hope this helps

Pretty good looking site.

I agree with most of the comments of prior posters.

You need to clean out all the typos and errors. The site looks sloppy with all the mistakes. Look for example for consistency in capitalizing things.

Also, it is really unclear what you are trying to do with the site and what you want the reader to do.

Good luck

I agree too - great site with great info. It looks like you are providing info and selling yurts and tipis, right? If so - the message came thru loud and clear to me!