wat do u think of both these sites. The first one is supposed to look professional and the second one not so much.
http://billspctips.tk
http://1016clan.tk
and if u like wat u see i am available for web design work lol

I am sorry, but rebranding never got my respect. The design is not original, not yours and it looks amateuristic. There is no quality in the openings page, the microsoft text is all musshed up and the links are just way to big in your face. If this is your first go: good job, but only because it looks like this is your first go. Also, it is very 1995 to include 'made with software x' .. visitors don't really care, only webmasters.

I'd score the first link a 5 out of 10.

well yes that was my first attempt at making a professional looking site. it was also my first site ever(i am not counting my stupid geocities sites).

In that case, a nice start to a design carreer. The best of luck with it.

ty very much.

If you plan on marketing via search engines, my advice would be to scrap the intro page. Its not a bad start for someone new in flash, although there are some dithering problems.

alright i will, i didnt make it in flash though it is all just animated gifs.

When I visited the first menstioned link I got the following message:
DOMAIN NAME IS CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE. PLEASE TRY AGAIN IN 5 MINUTES.

Also the pop-up with some advertisements, didn't gave me the idea that I was visiting a very serious website.

Do you really like the .tk domain so much ?

well about the error message in the past week i have been making some updates, and the .tk system was down for a day, so that could explain that prob, and i like the .tk cuz it is free and simple, most other free domain names have more then one thing like .get.it. I could afford a .com but i dont have a credit card or bank account so i am sort of stuck for now.

When I got my domain and the rest of the bunch from my host I paid them by Bank...No creditcards whatsoever !

I would look around for other possibilities...