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review my DESIGN.

Offline Jul 24th, 2009, 11:03 am |

hi, Folks!!

I am graphics designer and, normally I design and develop small websites.

I have new project coming up soon.

I am trying to build a website for my client.

I want suggestion, comments and your honest opinion on my design.

I will really appreciate your help.
Design 1:Link 1
Design 2: Link 2

Waiting for your reply.

Thanks

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laura_ci

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

Hi bhagu

so far I like your style =D

the first thing I noticed however is that you misspelled 'recieve', should be 'receive'...best change that before sending the concept to your client.

Lesson #1 - the importance of spell-checking. A lesson I am still learning myself!

hmm... there is something I like about the second link... bit more breathing space perhaps? However in the first one, the purpose of the website is much more apparent. Perhaps there is some way you can combine the two...?

bhagu

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

ha ha!!

nice observation. I will keep your lesson in mind now always.

Thanks for your kind and honest suggestion.. and pointing out my mistake.

I thing I will try to combine the both design.. Lets see how it goes??

any way one more time.. thanks

Peace

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Originally Posted by laura_ci

Hi bhagu

so far I like your style =D

the first thing I noticed however is that you misspelled 'recieve', should be 'receive'...best change that before sending the concept to your client.

Lesson #1 - the importance of spell-checking. A lesson I am still learning myself!

hmm... there is something I like about the second link... bit more breathing space perhaps? However in the first one, the purpose of the website is much more apparent. Perhaps there is some way you can combine the two...?

richardsink64 richardsink64 is offline

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

The first design works for me.

Richard

mano123

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

If i'm your client i'll definitely go for the first one. However, I have few suggestions

1. I'm using Google Chrome browser, when i open your first design it is showing horizontal scroll bar, which i think should not present and will have adverse effect on your client.

2. There is a lot of empty space around the image of your model which seems improper. so i think you should either decrease the size of image and place something else below image e.g slide show of images or insert something above the image of your model.

hopefully, my suggestions will help u improving ur design.

bhagu

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

Thanks Rechard.

I appreciate your honest reply.

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Originally Posted by richardsink64

The first design works for me.

Richard

MaxMumford MaxMumford is offline

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

I like your design

but take a look here

- http://www.lipsum.com/

easier than trying to make up random latin phrases for filling up space manually xD good luck.

bhagu

Offline | Jul 24th, 2009

Hey, Thanks!!

Well, the both designs are images with resolution of 1024 X 768. I guess that's what cause the horizontal scroll bar. Or may be chrome it's in zoom mode. try "CTRL + 0" on chrome. I guess that will show the whole design.

anyway! I appreciate your honest suggestion about the empty space. I will try to fill up that space around the model.

If you don't mind I will let you know about the updates.

Thanks again for your reply.

Peace

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Originally Posted by mano123

If i'm your client i'll definitely go for the first one. However, I have few suggestions

1. I'm using Google Chrome browser, when i open your first design it is showing horizontal scroll bar, which i think should not present and will have adverse effect on your client.

2. There is a lot of empty space around the image of your model which seems improper. so i think you should either decrease the size of image and place something else below image e.g slide show of images or insert something above the image of your model.

hopefully, my suggestions will help u improving ur design.