Review my SEO site

pls review my site i have done seo for htp://www.veedacr.com and www.hmint.com ,i need expert comment on both of my site from SEO point of view that what should be done to achieve my keywods, what kind of changes i required from SEO point of view, does it seo friendly or not so on.....

review it and say your expert comments on it.......

Have you tried putting this in the

>site management>search engine optimization forum?

That forum prohibits any site-specific talk. This is the proper place for any type of reviews - whether it's from a usability point of view, or SEO point of view, etc.