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I have managed to put nearly two decades of my research from a point of freedom to know the truth of nature on the net. It is kept as a challenge to all the temples of science and religion. My knowledge to handle the web to reach the world is limited. Will some one help me. The site title is " Sciecne of God" -- http://www.geocities.com/science_of_god/index.htm".
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Currently your Website adopts techniques such as the ones described here.
http://www.ratz.com/featuresbad.html
You need to move toward the use of features such as the ones decribed here.
http://www.ratz.com/featuresgood.html
To develop an understanding of the terms and principles outlined in those two brief documents, you should perhaps start by reading quite a few of the articles linked in this search:
http://www.google.com/search?sourcei...website+design
The colour scheme you've used is visually unattractive, the text stretches the entire width of the page, making it difficult to read, and there's little, if any, organisational structure to the way you've presented the information.
But beyond the elements of design and presentation that I've referred to, you need to go back and do a lot more work on the written style in which you've presented it before your 'message' is going to attract and appeal. Your grammatical style is stilted, clumsy, and unexciting. Are you aware, for example, that almost every sentence in your body of work starts with the words The, Thus, This, So, It, A, These, So and the unforgivables of To and But !
It also needs to be proofread to eliminate the typographical errors and spelling mistakes.
I appreciate the work and effort that's gone into what you've done. Unfortunately, there remains some rather fundamental work to be done on it before it's ready to be "given to the world"!
Sorry, but that's the way it is, I'm afraid.
http://www.ratz.com/featuresbad.html
You need to move toward the use of features such as the ones decribed here.
http://www.ratz.com/featuresgood.html
To develop an understanding of the terms and principles outlined in those two brief documents, you should perhaps start by reading quite a few of the articles linked in this search:
http://www.google.com/search?sourcei...website+design
The colour scheme you've used is visually unattractive, the text stretches the entire width of the page, making it difficult to read, and there's little, if any, organisational structure to the way you've presented the information.
But beyond the elements of design and presentation that I've referred to, you need to go back and do a lot more work on the written style in which you've presented it before your 'message' is going to attract and appeal. Your grammatical style is stilted, clumsy, and unexciting. Are you aware, for example, that almost every sentence in your body of work starts with the words The, Thus, This, So, It, A, These, So and the unforgivables of To and But !
It also needs to be proofread to eliminate the typographical errors and spelling mistakes.
I appreciate the work and effort that's gone into what you've done. Unfortunately, there remains some rather fundamental work to be done on it before it's ready to be "given to the world"!
Sorry, but that's the way it is, I'm afraid.
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