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Jun 25th, 2005
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C++ linked list help??

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I've gotten feedback from my instructor to modify my code because it contains poor design techniques. I need to add a " return " after each function without it going back to " main " and also to avoid the use of global headers.

I've tried to modify it several ways, but I cannot seem to do it. Any help would be greatly appreciated as I am still learning the c++ language.

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  1. # include<iostream.h>
  2. # include<stdlib.h>
  3. # include<conio.h>
  4. # include<string.h>
  5.  
  6.  
  7. struct ListEntry
  8. {
  9. char name[10];
  10. int idnumber;
  11. struct ListEntry *next;
  12. }
  13. start,*node,*prev;
  14.  
  15. void add();
  16. void viewdb();
  17.  
  18. void main()
  19.  
  20. {
  21. int choice;
  22.  
  23. system("cls");
  24. cout<<"Choose option from the menu below:\n\n";
  25. cout<<"[1] Insert an ID Number and Name\n";
  26. cout<<"[2] View the database\n";
  27. cout<<"[3] Exit\n";
  28. cout<<"\t\tEnter your choice: ";
  29. cin>>choice;
  30.  
  31. switch(choice)
  32. {
  33. case 1:
  34. add();
  35. break;
  36. case 2:
  37. viewdb();
  38. break;
  39. case 3:
  40. exit(1);
  41.  
  42.  
  43. }
  44. }
  45.  
  46. void add()
  47. {
  48. char choice;
  49. start.next=NULL;
  50. node=&start;
  51. do
  52. {
  53.  
  54. system("cls");
  55. node->next=(struct ListEntry*)malloc(sizeof(struct ListEntry));
  56. node=node->next;
  57.  
  58. cout<<"Enter an ID Number and Name:\t";
  59. cin>>node->idnumber>>node->name;
  60.  
  61. cout<<"Record saved. Input another? (Y,N): ";
  62. cin>>choice;
  63.  
  64. node->next=NULL;
  65. }
  66.  
  67. while(choice=='Y'||choice=='y');
  68. main();
  69. }
  70.  
  71. void viewdb()
  72. {
  73.  
  74. node=start.next;
  75. system("cls");
  76. while(node)
  77. {
  78. cout<<node->idnumber<<"\t"<<node->name<<endl;
  79. node=node->next;
  80. }
  81.  
  82. cout<<endl;
  83. getch();
  84. main();
  85. }
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Re: C++ linked list help??

yaan,

Inside your function definitions, you need to replace "main()" with "return".

You are calling the main function instead of actually returning to it.

You should also add some white space to your code so it is more readable. See below.

Take care,
Bruce

C++ Syntax (Toggle Plain Text)
  1. # include<iostream.h>
  2. # include<stdlib.h>
  3. # include<conio.h>
  4. # include<string.h>
  5.  
  6.  
  7. struct ListEntry
  8. {
  9. char name[10];
  10. int idnumber;
  11. struct ListEntry *next;
  12. }
  13. start,*node,*prev;
  14.  
  15. void add();
  16. void viewdb();
  17.  
  18. void main()
  19.  
  20. {
  21. int choice;
  22.  
  23. system("cls");
  24. cout << "Choose option from the menu below:\n\n";
  25. cout << "[1] Insert an ID Number and Name\n";
  26. cout << "[2] View the database\n";
  27. cout << "[3] Exit\n";
  28. cout << "\t\tEnter your choice: ";
  29. cin >> choice;
  30.  
  31. switch(choice)
  32. {
  33. case 1:
  34. add();
  35. break;
  36. case 2:
  37. viewdb();
  38. break;
  39. case 3:
  40. exit(1);
  41.  
  42.  
  43. }
  44. }
  45.  
  46.  
  47.  
  48. void add()
  49. {
  50. char choice;
  51.  
  52. start.next=NULL;
  53.  
  54. node=&start;
  55.  
  56. do
  57.  
  58. {
  59.  
  60.  
  61.  
  62. system("cls");
  63.  
  64. node->next=(struct ListEntry*)malloc(sizeof(struct ListEntry));
  65.  
  66. node=node->next;
  67.  
  68.  
  69. cout<<"Enter an ID Number and Name:\t";
  70.  
  71. cin>>node->idnumber>>node->name;
  72.  
  73.  
  74. cout<<"Record saved. Input another? (Y,N): ";
  75.  
  76. cin>>choice;
  77.  
  78.  
  79. node->next=NULL;
  80.  
  81. }
  82.  
  83.  
  84. while(choice=='Y'||choice=='y');
  85.  
  86. return;
  87.  
  88. }
  89.  
  90.  
  91.  
  92.  
  93.  
  94.  
  95. void viewdb()
  96. {
  97.  
  98.  
  99. node=start.next;
  100.  
  101. system("cls");
  102.  
  103. while(node)
  104.  
  105. {
  106.  
  107. cout<<node->idnumber<<"\t"<<node->name<<endl;
  108.  
  109. node=node->next;
  110.  
  111. }
  112.  
  113.  
  114. cout<<endl;
  115.  
  116. getch();
  117.  
  118. return;
  119. }
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Re: C++ linked list help??

Yaan,

Eliminating the calls to main is correct.

Your logic must be updated to allow your main menu to be shown until exit.

I have provided an update to your code below.

The update also seperates the requests for id and name.

Take care,
Bruce




C++ Syntax (Toggle Plain Text)
  1. # include<iostream.h>
  2. # include<stdlib.h>
  3. # include<conio.h>
  4. # include<string.h>
  5.  
  6.  
  7. struct ListEntry
  8. {
  9. char name[10];
  10. int idnumber;
  11. struct ListEntry *next;
  12. }
  13. start,*node,*prev;
  14.  
  15. void add();
  16. void viewdb();
  17.  
  18. void main()
  19.  
  20. {
  21. int choice;
  22.  
  23.  
  24. do
  25. {
  26.  
  27. system("cls");
  28. cout << "Choose option from the menu below:\n\n";
  29. cout << "[1] Insert an ID Number and Name\n";
  30. cout << "[2] View the database\n";
  31. cout << "[3] Exit\n";
  32. cout << "\t\tEnter your choice: ";
  33. cin >> choice;
  34.  
  35. switch(choice)
  36. {
  37. case 1:
  38. add();
  39. break;
  40. case 2:
  41. viewdb();
  42. break;
  43. //case 3:
  44. // exit(1);
  45. }
  46.  
  47. } while (choice != 3);
  48.  
  49.  
  50. }
  51.  
  52.  
  53.  
  54. void add()
  55. {
  56. char choice;
  57.  
  58. start.next = NULL;
  59.  
  60. node = &start;
  61.  
  62. do
  63.  
  64. {
  65. system("cls");
  66.  
  67. node->next = (struct ListEntry*) malloc(sizeof(struct ListEntry) );
  68. node = node->next;
  69.  
  70. cout << "Enter an ID Number:\t";
  71. cin >> node->idnumber;
  72.  
  73. cout << "Enter a Name:\t";
  74. cin >> node->name;
  75.  
  76.  
  77. cout << "Record saved. Input another? (Y, N): ";
  78. cin >> choice;
  79.  
  80.  
  81. node->next = NULL;
  82.  
  83. } while (choice == 'Y' || choice == 'y');
  84.  
  85. return;
  86.  
  87. }
  88.  
  89.  
  90.  
  91.  
  92.  
  93.  
  94. void viewdb()
  95. {
  96.  
  97.  
  98. node = start.next;
  99.  
  100. system("cls");
  101.  
  102. while (node)
  103.  
  104. {
  105.  
  106. cout << node->idnumber << "\t" << node->name << endl;
  107.  
  108. node = node->next;
  109.  
  110. }
  111.  
  112.  
  113. cout << endl;
  114.  
  115. getch();
  116.  
  117. return;
  118. }
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BruceWilson512 is offline Offline
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Re: C++ linked list help??

I see how adding more space makes the code easier to read. I tried your modifications and they worked. I was adding a " return 0; " instead of just a " return; "

Would you happen to know how to remove the global header node?

Thanks Bruce.
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Re: C++ linked list help??

Yaan,

There is another bug in your code.

Each time you start inserting records you are setting start.next = NULL. This destroys your pointer to any previously entered data.

Try inserting data, go back to main menu, insert more data, go back to main menu and view the db. The first set of data is gone.

Take care,
Bruce
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Re: C++ linked list help??

You aren't even using the variable "prev".

Do you really need the "start" variable?

Bruce
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