Criticize Me, Please.

[EDanaII]

I would appreciate a critique for the following database from anyone who is willing and has the time: Medieval Media Library .

All comments welcome.

Ed.

[GrimJack]

Oh, d*amn! I thought you just wanted some abuse - oh, well:

(i.e. it don’t exist) doesn't
in all form of medi - forms
Members may check out the media, much as with any library
Members may check out and enjoy the media, as with any library
it at their leisure. delete.

Should read:
The Medieval Media Library is a special library (i.e. it doesn’t exist) that deals in all forms of media, ranging from Movies, to Games, to Books. Members may check out and enjoy the media, as with any library.

The rest looks good but I am not much of an expert in that area.

[pclfw]

Your hair's a mess and your shoes don't go with your trousers. And when DID you think that that tie went with that shirt! :)

[GrimJack]

You're not going to wear that, are you?

[EDanaII]

What? No! [runs out of the room sobbing]