I have created a few poems with some of my fellow classmates and i wanted to share with you guys. Can you please feedback to me whether the poem is good or bad because there is a poetry performance soon and my group is planning to take part. Thanks
First poem
A friend is a treasure,
I am absolutely sure.
They like to love and care,
and I bet theyʼll always share.
Theyʼre always here to guide,
and always by your side.
So when youʼre feeling down,
theyʼll never make you frown.
A friend is a precious thing
and they will never sting.
But when they are in need,
you must be there indeed.
Even though youʼve fought,
Iʼm sure they helped a lot
So itʼs time we repay them,
By giving a dear gem.
Friends are forever,
Theyʼll be with you whenever.